Came across Mondays Finish the Story by chance, and the starting sentence attracted my attention! Here is a quickly composed post. Bear with me if it doesn’t live up to the expectation of this flash fiction category! The photo prompt is at the bottom of the post.
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A body suddenly crashed through a plate glass window at the Brigadierโs house.
And at that very instant, time stood still for the old General.
Her brown hair that once flowed in waves to decorate her straight nose, full lips and rosy cheeks, had turned grey. Her jovial amber blue eyes were, just like the first day, framed in softly arched eyebrows.
“They want me to take you down!”
The old General smiled. The love in his eyes itched her.
“Please, in your arms.” He begged.
He had dedicated his whole life to one woman. At last, she finally held him in her arms.
The sound of gunshot barely escaped the room.
******Photo Prompt******
This was a combination of love and duty. Duty seems to have won. Well done, Santosh. — Suzanne
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Duty calls! Thanks for reading and commenting Suzanne!
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Good story! I like the open ending. ๐
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I m glad that you enjoyed it!
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A wonderful love story written very well Santosh ~ ๐
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Thanks John!
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Beautiful lyrical love story!
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Thank you Shivangi!
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Oh, intriguing. I’ve no idea who fired the shot…
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That’s up to you to decide Sonya ๐
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There was a lovely air of compassion and love within your words. Well done enjoyed your tale.
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Thank you so much summerstory2! I m pleased to know that my writings are enjoyable ๐
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I loved your take to the prompt and I enjoyed your story. His life was devoted to her and she killed him.
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Well…I messed up the ending a little…corrected now…it was supposed to be open (not telling who killed whom) ๐
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I like this ending better – leave a doubt as to who got killed. Nice!!
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Nicely done! I am really happy to read that you just found this challenge! We have been having a blast with this! Thank you for participating, and I hope that you return next week! Be well… ^..^
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I participate on Friday Fictioneers (an amazing group of fictioneers). I will certainly keep my eye on this one too! Thanks for hosting it!
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YW! I hope you do come back! ๐
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